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In 1998, Ramona Chavez discovered that there was a great need in her neighbourhood for dog walkers. As an animal lover, Ramona began walking her neighbours’ dogs as a favour to them. Soon, she was so busy that she decided to speak with her banker about starting her own business. Today, Ramona’s company is in three locations and employs thirty people!

NOTE 1998: Ramona Chavez – animal lover/dog-walker – started own business – now has 3 locations; 30 employees

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two women out walking their dogs