Instead of:
Adopting a collaborative approach to coordinating the utilization of office equipment would be much appreciated by the office staff.
Use: Let’s work as a team to coordinate the use of office equipment.
Remember: Jargon is exclusive – it makes people feel unequal and sounds like a secret code or private language.
Some examples:
“We have nuanced the literacy problem and dialed up the honesty of the issue.” – TAXI advertising agency
“If you are determined to have a disability, we will pay you the following:” — government publication