LBS Level: 3

Demonstration Title: Hairstyle and Face Shape
Rubric for Written Responses

  2 3 4 5
Criteria Falls well below Approaches Meets Exceeds

 

Writing style

  • no discernible voice or inappropriate voice ❏
  • limited range or inappropriate vocabulary ❏
  • no sentence variety
  • weak or inconsistent voice but shows some awareness of the need to communicate with audience
  • simple but appropriate vocabulary for the purpose
  • limited but appropriate
    use of a few sentence
    types and structures
  • voice is generally appropriate for the purpose and audience
  • vocabulary is generally appropriate for the purpose and audience
  • some appropriate use of a variety of sentence types and structures
  • clear, consistent voice that is sustained and appropriate ❏
  • appropriate vocabulary for the purpose and audience
  • appropriate and effective use of sentence variety

 

Mechanics
(grammar, spelling and punctuation)

  • minimal or no use of common conventions of spelling, punctuation or paragraphing
  • minimal or no use of basic grammatical structures
  • errors interfere with clear communication
  • some evidence of correct use of common conventions of spelling, punctuation and paragraphing
  • some evidence of the correct use of subjectverb agreement and phrases to clarify meaning
  • errors create some confusion or obscure meaning
  • correct use of common conventions of spelling, punctuation and paragraphing
  • correct use of nounpronoun agreement with phrasing to clarify meaning
  • a few errors that do not interfere with meaning
  • consistent use of more complex conventions of spelling, punctuation and paragraphing
  • more consistent use of core features of grammar with a variety of sentence types for detail
  • practically no errors or error free