Certainly, in recent years some English and Australian judges have shown an increased willingness to condemn from the bench legal drafting that is convoluted and unclear. Epithets heaped upon offending clauses have included "botched"17, "half-baked"18, "cobbled-together"19, "doubtful"20, "tortuous"21, "archaic"22, "incomprehensible legal gobbledegook"23, and "singularly inelegant"24. (If I may be allowed some free advertising: you will find these and other examples in Butt and Castle, Modern Legal Drafting, Cambridge University Press, 2001, chapter 2.)


17.

Re Gulbenkian's Settlement [1970] AC 508 at 517 (Lord Reid).

18.

Alghussein Establishment v Eton College [1988] 1 WLR 587, HL.

19.

The Alexion Hope [1988] 1 Lloyd's Rep 311 at 320, CA (Purchas LJ).

20.

Overseas Union Insurance Ltd v AA Mutual International Insurance Co Ltd [1988] 2 Lloyd's Rep 63 at 69 (Evans J).

21.

London Regional Transport v Wimpey Group Services Ltd (1987) 2 EGLR 41 (Hoffmann J).

22.

Trafalgar House Construction (Regions) Ltd v General Surety & Guarantee Co Ltd [1995] 3 WLR 204 at 212 (Lord Jauncey of Tullichettle).

23.

Houlahan v Australian and New Zealand Banking Group Ltd (1992) 110 FLR 259.

24.

NSW Rifle Association v Commonwealth of Australia, unreported, New South Wales Court of Appeal, 15 August 1997, Powell JA.

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