A Dainty Dish to Set before the King: Plain Language and Legislation1

For my contribution to the conference, I thought I'd reflect a little on some limits of plain language which it seems to me are not always properly recognised. These arise out of two factors:

  • The performative character of legislation
  • Distortions in the communication model for legislation

Blackbird Pie

To put my remarks into perspective, though, I'd like to begin with the language of literature, and discuss the passage that begins Raymond Carver's story "Blackbird Pie":

I was in my room one night when I heard something in the corridor. I looked up from my work and saw an envelope slide under the door. It was a thick envelope, but not so thick it couldn't be pushed under the door. My name was written on the envelope, and what was inside purported to be a letter from my wife. I say "purported" because even though the grievances could only have come from someone who'd spent twenty-three years observing me on an intimate, day-to-day basis, the charges were outrageous and completely out of keeping with my wife's character. Most important, however, the handwriting was not my wife's handwriting. But if it wasn't her handwriting, then whose was it?

--Raymond Carver, "Blackbird Pie" (492)


1

Adapted from a paper originally presented at the 9th Annual Conference of the Law and Literature Association, Beechworth, 5-7 February 1999. My former colleague in the Australian Capital Territory, James Graham, provided some initial inspiration. The views expressed are, however, my own, not those of the ACT Parliamentary Counsel's Office or the Ontario Office of Legislative Counsel (the drafting offices in which I have worked while this paper has been gestating). Feel free to quote from the paper, with due acknowledgement.

Your comments are welcome. Contact me as follows:

email: nick.horn@jus.gov.on.ca [after 1 January 2003: nick.horn@act.gov.au] ph: 416-326-6962 (bh) [until 22 December 2002]

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