Editing Stage Triangle Stage: C3 Angle - Slide 12

C 3

Ideas/Arguments Sequential

   

Generality v. specificity

   

Vagueness v. precision

   

Abstraction v. concreteness

   

most importance to less important

   

strongest to weakess

   

Chronological/topical/players/

Ambiguity (purposeless)

   

Semantic- word

 

Syntactical-sentence (Punctuation, modification, & pronoun reference)

   

Contextual-document

Paragraphs

   

Manageable chunks

   

Visually inviting

   

One idea per

   

Topic sentence

   

Concluding sentence

   

Signposts (headings and subheadings)

   

Transitions within

   

Connections between

Sentences

   

Concrete subjects & action verbs

   

Voice appropriate to purpose

   

Dovetailing

     

Old to new,

     

key words, phrases, repeated

     

pronoun linkage

     

transitions

       

Core ideas in main clause

Sentence combining: from clause to phrase to single word/s

Right branching sentences

 

Words

   

Legalese, jargon, colloquialism, terms of art

   

Nominalizations

   

Diction matches PAT

       

Punctuation

   

Follows standard English rules

   

Serial comma used ,

   

which and that: nonessential or essential

   

comments on whole of sentence,

   

consistency of form

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