| DS: |
Who needs a
lesson in plain language? That's our question this afternoon and we have
Michelle Black from the Plain Language Association joining us from our Toronto
studio. And from Cathy we go to Jacqueline in Fenwick. Hi
Jacqueline! |
| Jacqueline: |
Good
afternoon. How are you? |
| DS: |
Good, thanks.
Who do you think needs a lesson in plain language? |
| Jacqueline: |
Well I think
anyone needs a lesson in plain language who's writing something for someone
else to read and sometimes even if the language is plain, I think it should be
put aside for a couple of days and you read it again yourself to see if it
really says what you want it to say.
And I have
an example to share. I purchased a cookbook, and it has a section on household
helps and hints: "To remove odour from plastic containers, wipe the container
with tomato juice, wash the container and lid with soap and water, dry well and
put lid and bowl separately in freezer for a couple of days. Also can be used
to remove odours from inside of refrigerators and dogs."
[all
laugh]
Like, just
read it over before it goes out! |
| DS: |
And as we say
in radio, "Out loud." Because it might not have been as evident on the page, or
there might have been a comma after "inside refrigerators, and dogs" and it
might have... |
| Jacqueline: |
So do we mean
"the outside of refrigerators and dogs?" |
| DS: |
Well that's
what it sounded like when you read it." |
| Jacqueline: |
Or does it
mean that we put the dogs inside of the refrigerator... |
| MB: |
That's what I
was thinking! |
| Jacqueline: |
I mean the
whole thing is just ludicrous, and it provided a bit of levity. I enjoyed
reading it and laughing, but I've had trouble reading it out loud because I
burst into laughter every time I come to "the inside of refrigerators and
dogs"! |