Clear, concise, shorter

Focus on primary user – PAC member

Deal with our disease of “unintelligible precision”

Good writing and clear thinking go together

342 pages

Internet version in mind

Measure success

Survey questions:

1. How readable is it?
2. Can you find your way around?
3. Is is interesting?
4. Does it help you do your job?

Our goal is to have our recommendations implemented within 3 years. Hope to see improved rate of implementation.