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Fourth Biennial Conference Proceedings
Toronto, Canada — September 26 - 29, 2002        
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      documents from delegates and suggested resources
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Government memo  #1
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Government memo  #2
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Government memo  #3
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Government memo  #1 ( Before )

Given a decade of activity already spent on the Blue Pages redesign project, the government should set realistic target dates for its timely completion and ensure a co-ordinated approach by the organizations responsible for the project.


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Government memo  #1 ( After )

The government has now spent ten years on the Blue Pages redesign project. It should now set realistic completion dates and ensure that the project organizations co-ordinate their approach.

Submitted by: The Gordon Writing Group
(613) 234-8300
pmoskos@gordongroup.com


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Government memo  #2 ( Before )

The government will continue its careful financial management, while strengthening, as resources are available, the Canadian health care and pension programs which are so important to us.


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Government memo  #2 ( After )

The government will manage finances carefully and strengthen Canada’s vital health care and pension programs.

Submitted by: The Gordon Writing Group
(613) 234-8300
pmoskos@gordongroup.com


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Government memo  #3 ( Before )

It would be appreciated if your response could be received by June 16, 2002, in order to allow sufficient time for it to be fully processed within our timeframe.


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Government memo  #3 ( After )

Please reply by June 16, 2002.

Submitted by: The Gordon Writing Group
(613) 234-8300
pmoskos@gordongroup.com


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