WORDS TO USE AND WORDS TO AVOID

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Before After
With respect to the processing, disposition and/or settlement of any grievance initiated under the Grievance Procedure Section of this Agreement, and with respect to any court action claiming or alleging a violation of this Agreement or any local or other agreement amendatory or supplemental hereto, the Union shall be the sole and exclusive representative of the employee or employees covered by this agreement. The Union is your bargaining and grievance representative in all areas covered by the contract.

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Before After
The CLC is holding an EI
workshop on Tues., Sept. 19.
The Canadian Labour Congress is holding a
workshop about Employment Insurance
on Tuesday, September 19.
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